Originally Written By br!j :-) at 2:35 PM
sahi hain ! predictable , but ok
it would have been better, if you would not have revealed in the beginning that Ankit and Neha were in love...(instead showed that they were emotionally close)...And only after Neha went to Bangalore, and somehow, Ankit and Neha meets, and their love revealed.just an arbit suggestion!But, its good to know that you have started writing stories also.
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